new design, what's your opinion...

[WDP Shooter]

I just worked on a jersey for team explicit. I need constructive criticism...

tell me what you think...

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/9433/trampjerseys0zm.jpg

the area behind the girls' logo is black, and the outer area is smoke... not a great representation, but im looking for feedback on the concept...

[Vantage_TeS]

Looks pretty sweet. I like how you made the words like the content rating on music etc [alot of people reconize the design].

[Th3bLaCkNiGhT]

i agree ... i do like the logo ... i dont really like the black/smoke look of the background though ... idk what eles it would be ... but it doesnt appeal to me

[WDP Shooter]

thanks guys... i am getting alot of good feedback about the logo and the chicks, but i was thinking of doing something like carbon fiber for the outside of the yellow... it will add a bit of depth and such...

[pb8907]

i think that looks awesome, carbon fiber sounds good but try not to make it too busy

[uniquenewyork15]

nice jersey...also, where is team explicit out of, cuz i see the thread in the northeasst section of pbn all the time

[jerseyballer15]

i think u should get rid of the girl in the top left, she isnt really standing out, and if anything looks more like a gothic freak lol.

other than that, looks good

[WDP Shooter]

nice jersey...also, where is team explicit out of, cuz i see the thread in the northeasst section of pbn all the time

I am from south jersey, and Explicit is calling Graveyard Paintball in Delaware home.

thanks everyone for the input. the updated jersey is prolly gonna be black outer side...

[zach45]

i dont like the girls... imho it makes you look like little fags ... no offence

[MrChromey]

i dont like the girls... imho it makes you look like little fags ... no offence

hmmm....having women on a jersey makes someone homosexual?

Anyway, whenever you're trying to make graphics that are going to be put on something, you want to try to keep solid colors. I'd change up the fade behind the team-name to a solid. If you're using photoshop, just change it to a stroke of 1 or 2.

[WDP Shooter]

i dont like the girls... imho it makes you look like little fags ... no offence


hmmm... dont like the girls cuz having girls makes you look gay? hmm...

never heard that before... thought it was the other way around.. oh well..

well, for everyone else, i am working on an updated version based on everyones comments...

[Viper-Mayhem]

I like the connotation. Some might not get it.

[zach45]

no but the fact that you need to put sexy girls might make u seem like the kind that dont get girls.... like i said no offence..

[Viper-Mayhem]

Well let take a closer look. You use the "no offense" to make a remark that can be construde as offensive but not seem like you are, when infact you are insulting him. You insinuate that he is a fag and can't get girls. I see that as offensive. Let's face it, I have seen t-shirts with more graphic pictures and "offensive" words that what he implies. You see them in magazines like Cosmo and Maxim and even public television with more insinuations than this. All he asked for was a little feedback on his design with some CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, not insults. So stop flaming him. WDP Shooter, you might want to put a target on her forhead for comedic value so "some" will not find it OFFENSIVE.

[WDP Shooter]

heres an updated version based on valid feedback on a few forums...

and all the players have girls.. lol...

thanks viper... couldnt have said it better myself...

[Viper-Mayhem]

You're welcome. I personally like it. It is not too graphic and the tombstone is clever. But like I said, some might not get it.

[zach45]

im not flaming.

so sorry i will stay out of this...

[Squishy OWNS YOU!!]

Nice Jerseys!!!

[Viper-Mayhem]

You could also put on the tombstone "R.I.P. 4-3Min."

[pb8907]

It looks good but the tombstone kind of looks out of place there maybe because it is an off shade from the girl or something i dont know